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Feeling good

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It's been a while since I took nature photos. But now I've finally got a few new ones ^^ The weather was cloudy/sunny/rainy/windy, so not that great to take photos, but it was fun anyway and I hope you'll enjoy the flowers too =)


This one is for #Closeup-Photography's Complimentary Color Contest.




-> Nature photos: [link]
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Wow that's a beautiful picture of the branch and flower!
I loved how you cropped this tight and gave us not just the focus of the flower, but the depth of field against what we perceive as the rest of the flowers in the background.

The colours were quite vibrant as well so that's a double plus!

However, to improve this a little more, I'm not sure if the moving in close of the shot made the focus a little off, as going in too close might cause you to lose the distance focus. Back-up a little more, and if need be, crop in. That still works.

You could also do with a little bit of sharpening to the picture as it looks a little too soft right now. The focus needs to stand out just a tad more and then you'll be alright!

Last point to note is something you might want to consider as it's just my opinion.
The watermark might work a little better to the picture if it was just below the flowers, it would fit well with the picture unless your intention is to block it fully so it won't be stolen <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":shrug:" title="Shrug" />

Overall a soothing piece!